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Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
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Somewhere near the Rainbow

0 posted 2001-08-29 11:21 PM


Tell Me

Look into my eyes,
Tell me what you see?
Is the world a rainbow,
Or are you following me?

Where might I be going,
Where may I have been?
Could you be a shadow,
In my deserted den?

To understand this poem better click here

[This message has been edited by Lost Dreamer (edited 08-29-2001).]

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Mother_Earth
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since 2000-11-20
Posts 1370
1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan
1 posted 2001-08-30 12:15 PM


Lost Dreamer, you showed another dimension with the picture.  Quite disturbing in a way.  But I liked it.  ME
doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812
Virginia
2 posted 2001-08-30 12:23 PM


GLORIA!!!!! how wonderful to see you and with such fine, concise verse...... geeezzzzz..... great writing here, my friend... where ya been? ...... more! please!

missya   hope all is well

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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New Brunswick Canada
3 posted 2001-08-30 01:29 AM


Very interesting click to explain the poem.  Great idea ...good read!
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