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peppermint35
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0 posted 2001-08-29 09:48 PM


Today is a blue day
Color me blue, moving to green
Better than the grey
Stark like the fog on the moor
Fog which distorts yet hides the pieces
Pieces scattered everywhere
The mirror has cracked from side to side
"My doom" indeed was upon me
Who am I?  Who.. who?? Where?
Lost in the fog without landmarks
Only safe here inside my little cave
Deep within the hollow hills
Hollow like my soul.

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
Percy Bysshe Shelley

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1 posted 2001-08-29 09:52 PM


P35~ wow.....I love this....wow....
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2 posted 2001-08-29 10:00 PM


PepperMint~
You certainly conveyed the blue~
Very nicely done~
~*Marge*~

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3 posted 2001-08-29 10:59 PM


Oh blue is one of my favorite colours, like purple too

You don't have a choice to die but you do have a choice how you meet it.


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