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SEA
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with you

0 posted 2001-08-29 05:52 PM





My heart falls
in love so deep
when I finally
fall asleep
You find your way
into my dreams
and I am lost
to you
it seems
All my wants
and all my needs
all my wishes
and romantic seeds
Blossom into
midnight fantasy
with you here,
in love with me
Under magic of  
miraculous moon
you touch my soul
I give way to swoon
Lavender perfume
fills my night
with you in my garden
holding tight
With but a look
into your eyes
you still my heart
in mesmerize
Sweeping me
in slow melting dance
touching from small of back
to nape of neck…..
~ entrance ~
Lost completely
to the feel of you
sublime
each sway and dip
I pray for more time
Every second
spent with you,
is absolute bliss
and I give myself,
to you in kiss
You lay me down
on bed of flower
slip inside,
and give your power
Morning will come,
this dream will fade
but I’ll always remember,
this transcendental
love we made

~SEA~

[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 08-29-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
Sven
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1 posted 2001-08-29 06:37 PM


love on another plane. . .would it still be love?

of course. . .  

very wonderfully done SEA. . .

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Tracey
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2 posted 2001-08-29 06:40 PM


You took the words right out of my mouth. And with great beauty I might add. I've often felt this way. Great work
MyEnchanted_Melody
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
3 posted 2001-08-29 07:20 PM




Lovely.......
Beautifully expressed ......and you are lucky to feel that way......

Thank you
*************************

"Oh...me!Oh Life!
Of the questions of these recurring..........
Of myself forever reproaching myself,
for who more foolish than I......"
~Whitman~

Janet Marie
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4 posted 2001-08-29 07:46 PM


MY OH MY OH MY....
MMM MMM MMMM ...
any words that my mothy mouth could say would be wasted....
this is very very cool....Id of like to have seen hubbys face when he read this one  

"oh you speak to me in riddles
and you speak to me in rhymes
my body aches to breathe your breath
your words keep me alive"

~Sarah McLachlan~

SEA
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5 posted 2001-08-29 07:54 PM


Sven~ thank you very much  

Tracey~ welcome! glad you liked this  

MEM~   thanks  

Janet~ yeah,   actually, he loved it   as it was a dream I had of him that inspired this   cold medicine makes for some wild dreams LOL  


~SEA

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6 posted 2001-08-29 07:58 PM


SEA~
Very romantically presented.
The graphic is wonderful.
*smiles*
~*Marge*~

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7 posted 2001-08-29 07:58 PM


Beautifully sensual!! Love it!

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

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8 posted 2001-08-30 01:15 PM



I do believe this to be one of the prettiest poems you've ever penned....

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9 posted 2001-08-30 05:52 PM


Sea,

    I just love your writing.   So soft and beautiful and tender and romantic... I can go on    I liked it.. alot.

TaraB

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10 posted 2001-08-30 06:02 PM


You write awesome lovepoems Sea, and this one is no exception.....love it!!

((hugs))
Charisma

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11 posted 2001-08-30 06:10 PM


Very romantic and lovingly sensual, beatiful write SEA.

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.
ARAB PROVERB

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