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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Somewhere Out There ~*Marge Tindal*~ Somewhere across the night Out of my realm of sight There is a place, A special place, that memories of the Heart gently lay Is this the place where hearts are Breaking, or the place of love in-making ? Somewhere past the heartache Out of the misty blue There is a place, A special place where dreams come true Heart of recent aching Is on the mend again Aching pain of realizing that Far away another heart bends Beyond the horizon of the dawn The sun will rise and gently Set on lovers who do not forget Of songs sung in the midnight hour Sun will shine again, you see Hopefully for you and me Another heart has found Love that knows someone Will surely Come~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
way cool...helen |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Oh yes! |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Somewhere past the heartache Out of the misty blue There is a place, A special place where dreams come true ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Yes, I believe this too. Beautiful poem Marge. Deb |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Another Masterpiece from your hand Marge. Love the message within as I believe that too. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge-- A special place where dreams come true Yes, I believe it is true. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OneSlickLady~ Way thanks !  LadyInWhite~  BloomingRose~ Thank you, sweet lady~  Charisma~ I'm glad you like it, dear.  Martie~ Me too, sweetie~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Awww, a lovely poem and I enjoyed the hidden message as well. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very very creative, Marge! Wow! Fantabulous!!! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh yes! This is wonderful. Just beautiful, and so creatively done. Sandra |
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cottage Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 138 |
oh marge, u've never failed to give me new hopes through your beautiful words. I really love this poem...makes one dare to dream. love, cottage |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Oh I like the way u did that You don't have a choice to die but you do have a choice how you meet it. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Enchantress~ Thank you. I enjoy playing with poetry~ Denise~ *giggles* ... You know I'm glad you like it~ CatalinaMoon~ Thanks, hon~ Cottage~ Ahhhh, now that's why I share~ Thank you~ MoonDust~ Thank you so much. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh this is simply fantastic...yes I understand...thank you |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Oh, Marge, I hope there is room at the table Where Dreams Are Made for another chair! I am certain there is a place. Wonderful, ME |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hopefully another love will come! Very clever Marge and so well expressed in verse. Love the searching mood of the main text of the poem!! Good show dear poet lady.... Have a nice day and I'll pray that you'll have no storms with a name way down there. ethome |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ - MotherEarth~ Yep ... always room for another heart, dear lady~ ETHome~ I always enjoy your comments, friend. And thank you for the thoughtful prayers~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I love how you do what you do. Your God given talent shines so bright in all that you write. It's no wonder you touch so many hearts. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
beautiful Marge , wonderful word heart's call they say time does heal all Hope |
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maeve Member
since 2001-08-01
Posts 139In the Outback |
Wow! I like this, Marge. Two for the price of one. Maeve Take me home to Erin's shores, |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- *smiling* ..."There is a place, A special place where dreams come true" Oh...let's go there!...today!! I love this, sweet lady! Hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 08-30-2001).] |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
You are awesome. Creative and talented. Thanks. Melton |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Somewhere past the heartache Out of the misty blue There is a place, A special place where dreams come true Wonderful Marge. Something beautiful to believe in and look forward to Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Thank you soooooo much. I try~ Hope~ Yeppers ... it's s'posed to ! Maeve~ Glad to share a bargain with you~ Thanks~ Vicky~ I like the very idea ~ Let's~ Melton~ Awwwww ! Thank you~ Dee~ I believe ! I believe ! Thanks, gal~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
How could I have missed this awsome beautiful clever clever verse WOW Glad I have my page set at 200 poems a page. Oh WOW two verses in one You sweety Marge, you give me homework for the rest of my life uhhhh? TitiaA rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
very neat miss margie! i had a friend once write me a poem in this style..he told me it had a hidden msg....it took me forever to figure it out..LOL..thanks for the highlights!  much enjoyed..and would very much like a map to this place..have you one about you?? hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: Another one of your enchanting poems! So touching and poignant! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I'm glad that place is there..... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Titia~ LOL @ your 'homework'~ You are sooooooooo cute ~ DG~ You're welcome~ A map ... silly girl, just follow your heart~ BettyLou~ Thanks so much for your support of my writing. Elizabeth~ Me too, sweetie~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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