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Dee
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0 posted 2001-08-29 06:10 AM


We’ve laughed together
when no one else hears.
In tender moments
I’ve shed a few tears.
The green-eyed monster
is always somewhere,
but without my love
it wouldn’t be there.
A red heads’ temper
can easily burn,
sweet conversations
can, so quickly, turn.
You have seen the good
as well as the bad.
You know what I am,
what I’ve never had….

and still you want me.

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

© Copyright 2001 Dee Manders - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2001-08-29 06:14 AM


Dee~
Awwwwwwwwwww !
This is so sweet~
*smiles*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Dee
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2 posted 2001-08-29 06:19 AM


Marge, nice to see your name first on here. I wanted to write something sweet and cute for someone, just to tell him how much he means. Thanks for reading it.


Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

Janet Marie
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3 posted 2001-08-29 08:04 AM


hell hath no fury like a mad red head  
sweet and sincere poem Dee...
if they still see us at our best after seeing our worst....then we know we're doing something right  
well done poetess Red
jm

"oh you speak to me in riddles
and you speak to me in rhymes
my body aches to breathe your breath
your words keep me alive"

~Sarah McLachlan~

vandana
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4 posted 2001-08-29 11:20 AM


enjoy
Dee
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5 posted 2001-08-29 05:07 PM


JM, he's seen the good and the bad of this red head and he still sticks around. Maybe he's the one that's doing something right.  

vandana, thanks for reading.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

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