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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-08-28 09:51 PM


A book of love I have written
about the love I feel for you
Our first chapter began
when our love was brand new
You'd bring me flowers
and light up my life
with your radiance and your charm

In chapter two you so effortlessly
swept me off my feet
as you romanced me on the beach at sunset
You told me you loved me
as our fingers interlaced
by the edge of the water
You took me to heaven as we made love
under the light of the moon

Throughout chapter three
our love continued to grow
How much we'd thrive
within each others company
as love elevated us to greater heights
and being together became our top priority

Chapter four sees us together forever
like two peas in a pod
We snuggle together on the couch
watching old romantic movies
as you wipe away my tears
and kiss my wet cheek
I smile at the way you fuss over me
and kiss you long and deep

The magic still remains
as love's embers burn ever so brightly
My heart still skips a beat
whenever you call out my name
and your sweet kisses warm my soul
even after all this time
Our passion will never die
as our chapters of love
know no boundaries
and our love story has no end

Suetang

© Copyright 2001 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Mother_Earth
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since 2000-11-20
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1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan
1 posted 2001-08-28 10:01 PM


Suetang, what a lovely love story.  I hope the chapters continue and this becomes a novel.  ME
Alan
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since 2000-09-12
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right next door
2 posted 2001-08-28 10:17 PM


This is beautiful. I hope to see more of this.
alan

2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08
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Mississippi coast
3 posted 2001-08-30 09:35 AM


This is so nice and romantic. I wish you happiness to write chapter "Evermore".

Melton

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
4 posted 2001-08-30 09:37 AM


Ah! The beautiful warmth of lasting love....there's nothing like it!!  
Wonderfully written I enjoyed the entire book and keep it alive forever!

Dee
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since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia
5 posted 2001-08-30 09:46 AM


Sue, what a lovely way of looking at love. Here's to the never ending story.  

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

DawnG
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6 posted 2001-08-31 12:36 PM


Sue,

What a lovely piece of writing. I can only pray to fall in love like that some day.

                 Dawn

Midnitesun
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Gaia
7 posted 2001-08-31 03:13 AM


What a wonderful storybook. You are so lucky to have so many chapters of love. May the story never end.
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
8 posted 2001-08-31 03:17 AM


Looks like I never got past chapter 2...James
EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...
9 posted 2001-08-31 05:38 AM


As you have discovered, it's one book that never ends, well done!

"Let me pierce the realm of glamour
So I know just what I am." ~ Van Morrison


Janette
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10 posted 2001-09-01 10:31 AM


Ahhhhhhhhhhh...so romantic, I love it!
Janette

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21
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In a corporeal internship...
11 posted 2001-09-01 11:43 AM


A dream to savour...  a memory to never forget.  One more wonderful chapter to the definition of Love, ala Suetang...

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS


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