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Friendship |
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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States 
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Friendship hits the spot Relative adventures forming anew Inventive procedures proceeding from within Ecstasy building with each new surprise Nocturnal dreams of days spent with you. Developing new focus as the year’s gone by Silhouetted fears long gone Harmonious birds singing songs Intensifying your love of spirit Promising to be forever in our hearts. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Dawn This was so wonderfully written and so much enjoyed. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DawnG~ A lovely and effective acrostic ! Good on you ~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Amature2 Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 416 |
DawnG, this is nice, I like the last line. "Promising to be forever in our hearts." |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Dawn, This is awesome, you really dove into this acrostic and you did a great job with it. Way to go, keep them flowing.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
DawnG, I agree with Marge. Enjoyed |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
DawnG...I agree with Amature2. Your poem is lovely, but especially the final line. Well done. Bob |
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