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dgvarner
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0 posted 2001-08-28 12:38 PM



i
  fell
       in
          love
          with you,
but you said
     i didnt know who...
    
so i'll ask you,
     who loses out?
me,
for having loved
          and let go--
or you,
for never letting go
          to love?

-dgvarner
   8-01



~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"i believe we are here for a reason.  
as each day unfolds,
we see less of the shadow
and more of the sun"  -unknown

[This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 08-28-2001).]

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Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2001-08-28 01:04 PM


ah...nicely questioned... nicely done...

I enjoyed

kaile
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2 posted 2001-08-28 01:11 PM


ohhh, this likes me very much...

tough question..made me think though i profess to have no answers...

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3 posted 2001-08-28 02:33 PM


DG~
Very effectively formatted~
Nicely written~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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4 posted 2001-08-28 02:43 PM


hmmmm, yep, very nicely done...just the right amount to make the reader think
shadow974
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5 posted 2001-08-28 03:25 PM


Great question, who has lost most? I bet you have the answer. Loved your poem.

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.
ARAB PROVERB

cpalmer
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6 posted 2001-08-28 03:43 PM


Very interesting thought! My thought...he lost! hugs  
Cindi

vlraynes
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7 posted 2001-08-28 03:44 PM



dg-
   I'm soooooo glad you're posting again!
   I've missed your poetry bunches!!!
   Though this one is a bit sad, I still
   am liking it lots.
   Very intriguing question, indeed...

   Love and hugs,
   ~Me

  
  

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



Charisma
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8 posted 2001-08-28 03:57 PM


like it very much and also the presentation of this form......very nicely done.

((hugs))
Charisma

Parker
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9 posted 2001-08-29 12:23 PM


Its a tough question. I seem to have the same problem. Letting go can be scary.
Very nice write.  

Parker

ethome
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10 posted 2001-08-29 08:06 AM


He's the loser....you know the old....... better to have loved and lost than......... I think there's a certain amount of truth in that don't you?     enjoyable read!
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11 posted 2001-08-29 11:23 AM


liked it
dgvarner
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12 posted 2001-08-29 12:45 PM


CPAT..thanks     glad you enjoyed..
KAILE..LOL @ you..i like you very much too my friend..thanks for stopping in  
MARGIE..thanks..its a little scattered aye..lol    
JELLYBEANS..i thank you much  
SHADOW..lol..i dont know if i have THE answer..but i have one..     thanks for reading..
CINDI..thank you for your thoughts     
TRICKS..just a little ditty my heart picked out..   but i'm glad youre glad i'm here  
CHARISMA..thank you  
PARKER..but is letting go necessary..?  or just an option?  and who says, when that point is?
ETHOME..yes..i do think theres A LOT of truth in that..    thanks for reading..
VANDANA..glad you liked  

hugs, g

[This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 08-29-2001).]

maeve
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13 posted 2001-08-30 02:55 AM


dg, let me know when you find out the answer.   Nice write.

Maeve

Take me home to Erin's shores,
to where my heart roams free.

dgvarner
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14 posted 2001-08-31 07:23 AM


MAEVE..i know only my answer, my friend..i think its gotta be an individual thing..lol  but i think to never love is a tragedy..

thanks for reading me  

hugs, g

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