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My Prayer For You |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I pray that you are sleeping well freedom found within your dreams May Soma find sweet charity reprieve from inner screams. I understood your helplessness. I read your words across the screen. I wanted to reach out to you-- afford you some relief. I felt your pain through fingertips and I knew you wept. I hope you found serenity-- smiling as you slept.  I am annointing candles in your honor for tonight. I hope you feel the love, my friend. I pray that you're alright. (a little cyberhug for a very special person...  ) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I understood your helplessness. I read your words across the screen. I wanted to reach out to you-- afford you some relief. I felt your pain through fingertips and I knew you wept. I hope you found serenity-- smiling as you slept. ================================ perfect me twin...perfect poetry with kind intend  me |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nice thought sfor a friend..and a nicely written poem... but then again...I expect as much from you.... ( grinning) |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
"I understood your helplessness. I read your words across the screen. I wanted to reach out to you-- afford you some relief. I felt your pain through fingertips and I knew you wept. I hope you found serenity-- smiling as you slept. " Very very well done Celeste....you are always such a passionate read! |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Amazing how you extend this lovely gesture for one, but that all reap the loveliness of your intent... well done! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i'm sure your friend would appreciate this lovely gesture...i know i did... by the way, may i ask who is Soma? |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
kaile--- here ya go! http://peyote.com/jonstef/what-is.htm It is also a popularly prescribed muscle relaxer. And thanks to all for reading, and I should explain that I am not proposing this as a remedy to all--but this particular poem was directed to a friend who happens to be very ill...so let's keep that in mind? |
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citizenx Member
since 2001-07-31
Posts 189motorcade |
I pray that you are sleeping well freedom found within your dreams May Soma find sweet charity reprieve from inner screams. Seren, I am sure that your friend will treasure this cyber hug. Beautifully written. "the blizzard of the world has crossed the threshold and it has overturned |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Very nice and tenderly thoughtful write, enjoyed. Throw your heart out in front of you |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
serenity, I hope this friend realizes what a friend he/she has. This touches me in a special way. Nice work! Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
I am very thankful to u for this act of kindness serenity ....... I am axpecting same prayers from you |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Senerity, Beautiful words, wonderful jesture. |
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