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Ava'sEden
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since 2001-08-03
Posts 16
Far&Away

0 posted 2001-08-28 07:25 AM



Sometimes
People question my aloneness
My cabin, my haven
I have known love
On the mountain
And I'm very content
For I know the valleys well
I am here among the living
Just quiet
And always hostess
To many who come to dwell with me
Breakfast at Ava's
Could only be so special
Because I spend my time wisely
Going over the menu
Of my next offering
In Joy

© Copyright 2001 Ava Devoe - All Rights Reserved
WRBreezin
Member
since 2001-08-04
Posts 212

1 posted 2001-08-28 07:28 AM



I like this, a sense of solitude with purpose, and direction. Great passion as well!

Willie

RSWells
Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533

2 posted 2001-08-28 08:08 AM


I wish I were supping in such serene surroundings. Enjoyed.
Decaflame
Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635

3 posted 2001-08-28 11:39 AM



I wouldn't question your sanity in such a refuge...

I would join you!

VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
4 posted 2001-08-28 12:05 PM


Oh, wow!  That's the way I'd like to be...the place where people love to come to dine. Ah, me, if only I'd really clean my house.   I guess I just don't believe they'd come even if I went to all the effort.  

You write so wonderfully well, Ava, and you certainly do have an Eden!


[This message has been edited by VAS (edited 08-28-2001).]

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2001-08-28 05:12 PM


Sounds like a home to me...James
Marge Tindal
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since 1999-11-06
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
6 posted 2001-08-28 08:11 PM


Ava'sEden~

'I have known love
On the mountain'


I LOVE this line~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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