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HopeS
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0 posted 2001-08-28 02:09 AM


Without Fanfare

I shall not be missed
You won’t even care
Silently I will leave
Without a fanfare

I will tip toe quietly
Make not a sound
Taking my leave
See you around

In making my exit
Let me mention
It is not for pity
Nor for attention

Pay me no tribute
No one will read
Pretend respect
This I don’t need

So remember me
Heart often bare
Now its empty
Please do not care

You will be happy
Now I am gone
Take care friends
Farewell everyone

Hope©2001

© Copyright 2001 HopeS - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2001-08-28 03:15 AM


HopeS~
This is a sad little note~
I would care ...
for even one friend from the circle would be missed~

Nicely penned~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                   noles1@totcon.com            

HopeS
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2 posted 2001-08-28 03:34 AM


Marge thanks sincerely
Hope signs tearfully
Hope

vlraynes
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3 posted 2001-08-28 04:56 AM



Hope-
   This tugs at my heart.
   I would care too...for each time a friend
   leaves, there is a new break in the circle,
   which no one else can fill.
   Wonderful write.  

   hugs,
   ~vicky




"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes




[This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 08-28-2001).]

HopeS
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4 posted 2001-08-28 05:01 AM


Thanks for your kind caring response Vicky
I am sure I will be fine
This was my "feeling downtime
Hope

WRBreezin
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5 posted 2001-08-28 05:29 AM


Here's to chasing away the blues! Your writing has been a constant favorite of mine for sometime.


Willie

[This message has been edited by WRBreezin (edited 08-28-2001).]

rwood
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6 posted 2001-08-28 07:24 PM


But what would we be without "Hope"
I don't want to think about it.  
Write on dear Poet!


Sincerely,
Regina

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2001-08-28 07:27 PM


And furthermore ...
You need to share your web site here ! !
Now hop to it !
*Hugs*

~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                   noles1@totcon.com            

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