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will you tell me |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida 
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i'm not supposed to love you. you told me that i couldnt know-- but i knew. i felt you with my soul. my hands longed to touch you. i shook with the reality of my heart... and now-- now, will you tell me i'm not supposed to miss you? -dgvarner 8-01 ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ "i believe we are here for a reason. as each day unfolds, we see less of the shadow and more of the sun" -unknown [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 08-28-2001).] |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
i'm not supposed to love you. i'm not supposed to miss you? From the first line to the last, I felt this in a thousand ways. And understood every one of them. |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
I like this. I have felt this way often. good job. alan |
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ramrog Member
since 2001-08-22
Posts 50 |
I felt this deeply. very nice. "If you choose not to decide, |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DG~ Oooooooh, I like this ! Very, very nicely said~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Awww, this is kind of sad. Good job on writing it.  Jenn "Baby I've been drifting away, dreaming all day, of holding you, touching you, the only thing that I wanna do is be with you..."Faith Hill |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Good work here...sad but with such delivery and presentation! well crafted! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
if only our hearts were that easy to control...*sigh* touching heartfelt write of longing dg good to see your name here again. love your signature too take care jm |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
much thanks to you all for sharing this with me.. i enjoy the comments you leave at my doorstep hugs, g |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done... I enjoyed! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
an honest write that many of us can relate to...kudos to you for expressing such sentiments i'm just collecting stories in life....colleen from survivor 1 |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
This is well done! It touched my heart in many different ways...thanks Cindi [This message has been edited by cpalmer (edited 08-28-2001).] |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
A very lovely and touching write..... I really enjoyed it..... Thank you ************************* "Oh...me!Oh Life! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- You KNOW I'm feeling every word of this one right along with you. Glad to see you decided to post it. Love ya,  ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
And I felt every word...you said it nicely. like it! Charisma |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
I like the way you think, been there, am there. Parker |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
Ouch! \\ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
CPAT..glad to have you enjoying KAILE.. thanks friendCINDI..i'm glad it could reach the reader.. MYENCHANTED..thanks glad you enjoyed..TRICKS..thanks for feeling it with me.. CHARISMA..glad you liked PARKER..am there? whats it feel like on your end? WANDERING..lol..thanks for reading VANDANA..thanks hugs, g |
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maeve Member
since 2001-08-01
Posts 139In the Outback |
dg, one of those things we wouldn't want to miss, if we could just skip the pain. Maeve Take me home to Erin's shores, |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
i dunno MAEVE..it may even be worth the pain.. we just need to be sure we choose well..  hugs, g |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
The reality of a hurt heart feels no logic. Though we are told we are not to feel a certain way, sometimes it's impossible. I can surely relate. A very trueful heartfelt poem you have written. Deb |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
How is it that people think we can turn off and on like a faucet, when you want to be Niagra falls? This is genuinely valid thoughts to age old heart ache. Loved this! Sincerely, Regina |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
BLOOMING....."feels no logic..." yes..that.. thanks for reading.. RWOOD..a faucet i'm not..lol i'm glad you enjoyed this one.. hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
so much pain in a few words...helen |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
dg, I know this feeling. Thanks for sharing it with us. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
HELEN, DEE..thanks so much for reading..!  ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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