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Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

0 posted 2001-08-27 11:53 PM

Good Morning

Good Morning.....
I hope this finds you contented.
I hope you slept well.
I hope you know
That you are a big part of my world
In some ways you are the best thing
That has come to me in a very long time.
I can look to the skies
I can see your eyes
I listen to the wind
I can hear the message you send
I would love to be by your side
At the dawns early light
For that would mark the end of the greatest night
That I have ever seen
For I would have been
With the woman of my dreams
That would be you
To me you are a rose
To be handled with gentle hands
To be loved above anything else
Nothing greater in all the land
Than to have you in my heart
That is where you have belonged
Right from the start
I hope you have a good day
Cause you made mine
Right from the start

alan

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

1 posted 2001-08-28 12:18 PM

What alucky lady she is...to have your love

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

2 posted 2001-08-28 12:19 PM

I would love to be by your side
At the dawns early light
For that would mark the end of the greatest night
That I have ever seen
For I would have been
With the woman of my dreams

And when that night comes to pass, you'll remember your own words in this poem...smiling to the powers that be, a simple 'thank you'.

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

3 posted 2001-08-28 12:24 PM

how awesome to hold this, personally penned, in her hands, reading your heart...

i hope she has read it...

very wonderful..romantic, loving, tender..

enjoyed..
hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"i believe we are here for a reason.
as each day unfolds,
we see less of the shadow
and more of the sun" -unknown

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

4 posted 2001-08-28 12:51 PM

Thank you all for your kind comments.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2001-08-28 11:02 AM

Alan~
A lovely loving write~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

6 posted 2001-08-28 11:05 AM

Very tender and touching write! Good work!

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

7 posted 2001-08-28 11:29 AM

Thank you Marge and Ethome....glad you liked it

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

8 posted 2001-08-28 01:25 PM

i read and i smiled..thanks for sharing your romantic side

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

9 posted 2001-08-28 01:31 PM

Alan, she will love this...send it to her...

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

10 posted 2001-08-28 02:13 PM

yes, do let her read this

It is sooooo beautiful

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