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Lady In White
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0 posted 2001-08-27 02:50 PM



Linger in my heart…
Yet a little longer
A welcoming of
soul mate greeting
I shall sort the recall
Of our last meeting

Did you realize
Your touch warmed me?

Or that your words
Disarmed me?

That you left me
A little undone

Before you left
In break of sun

Now you linger here
Your name on my lips
Still feeling that sweet touch
Of lightest fingertip

Still warm
Disarmed
Undone

Still yours
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1 posted 2001-08-27 07:12 PM

Great write. I can truly appreciate the sentiments expressed here.

                             Dawn
Trina
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2 posted 2001-08-27 08:24 PM

oooo i like this , I don't know how else to express how much I like this one. Thanx for sharing
Alan
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3 posted 2001-08-27 11:23 PM

I really like this. It is beautifully written.
alan
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4 posted 2001-08-27 11:26 PM

I know exactly how this is.
right to my heart this went.
and right to my library now  
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