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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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As The Sunlight Played Reflection ... ~*Marge Tindal*~  You came softly to me as the wind across the sea blowing ever-gentle through my mind Held me in the breezing of a summer afternoon as the sunlight played reflection in your eyes O' I have tasted sunshine in the smile upon your lips and you've quenched the thirsting passion of my fire I've known the soft caress of your loving tenderness as you tread lightly across the bridge of my desires I'm loving you more dearly as the days go drifting by and I never want to leave your gentle sighs I will stay forever grounded in the joy of wanting you as the sunlight plays reflection in your eyes ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Flutterwings Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 288Maine |
Marge, this is a breathing vision of charm and grace. Penned with much finesse. Splendid imagery and inner feelings.  I enjoyed the craftiness. Bravo!!! Love and peace Maggie |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Big smiles on this one.... |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Beautifully tender and romantic, very nice. Throw your heart out in front of you |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Oh Marge it is always a pleasure to open your post. you always know to impress us with your creative mind....love it....my dear friend. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
FlutterWings~ Thank you so much. It just came singing from my heart~ Karilea~ I like those *smiles* you wear~ Thanks for sharing one with me~ Shadow~ Thank you. I like 'romantic'~ Charisma~ Such a sweet reply, my friend~ *Hugs* to you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
So beautiful, I truly love this. And a perfect picture to go with it.  Sandra |
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poetsguild Member
since 2001-08-12
Posts 85Florida |
A sweet soothing refrain, Marge. Thanks for posting. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The Romantic side of Marge Tindal INDEED!! this is soooo lovely...the rhyme flows like that breeze you write of and that repetative line is worth its weight in poetic gold. Beautiful inspire Margie!! Feels like Im dancin with truth and wisdom |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
very soft Marge, reads like a song a very romantic song |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Yes, this is very good. Well written, tight form, read it several times. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marge- Wow! This is incredibly beautiful! So soft and romantic, and yes...it sings.. Wonderful graphic too. I just love ALL of this one! Love ya,  ~vicky ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Marge Such a beautiful romantic piece you have given us here written from a special soul. Take care....Sue Suetang |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
You done good, kid...very gentle smile |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Marge, I had to sneak in and see what's been happening. I'm so glad I did or I may have missed this. Beautiful. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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ramrog Member
since 2001-08-22
Posts 50 |
beautifully touching. Enjoyed it very much. "If you choose not to decide, |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- Just thought I'd come back again as 'me'! LOL! Me is the blondie tonight! And...both of me likes this poem lots!  love ya, ~Me "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CatalinaMoon~ Thanks so much. The graphic was a 'challenge'. PoetsGuild~ I appreciate your thoughts. JanetMarie~ Thankee, love~ I kind of thought you might enjoy it~ Me smile big~ SEA~ Just romancing the pen~ Thank you, sweetie~ MirrorMan~ I sure appreciate your comments. ME TWIN~ You took the 'cookies' right outta my jar ! ! ROFLMLBO ! ! SueTang~ Thanks my friend~ Logan~ Huge smiles, my sweet fella~ RamRog~ Thank you very much. VICKY~ LOL @ your L'Oreal shade of the night~ Chocolate chip overdose ???? ROTFLMBHO ! ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dee~ You 'sneaked' in so quietly - I missed you ! And I wouldn't want to do that for the world~ Thanks sweet lady ! Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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