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Transitory Bliss
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Transitory Bliss |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Transitory Bliss Barring all eccentric stances I would be your friend. Screening all peculiar dances Till my very end Our souls have met and stayed a day A lingering kiss Exchanged our hearts within that stay Momentary bliss. You have entered in my garden Opened up the door Gave desires without pardon Could I ask for more? You have my deepest kindest thoughts Fantasies of style You are the harbor and my port Of my greatest wile I thank you for this lingering kiss This ever, transitory bliss |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What a blessing you are, transitory or otherwise... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nice... I enjoyed the flow and the rhyme..very well done. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
should you ask for more? ALWAYS ask for more---you just might get it!  sigh...transitory bliss, indeed. Thanks sy, for the Monday smile. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, And how warm you are. *L* Cpat Hair, Always happy to bring a little joy. Serenity, The smile is on me, thank you. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Our souls have met and stayed a day A lingering kiss Exchanged our hearts within that stay Momentary bliss. You have entered in my garden Opened up the door Gave desires without pardon Could I ask for more? You have my deepest kindest thoughts Fantasies of style You are the harbor and my port Of my greatest wile I thank you for this lingering kiss This ever, transitory bliss ============================= YOUR POETIC KISS IS BLISS ... AND OHHOWILOVEWHENYOUWRITELIKETHIS!!!!! There are kisses made of candy There are kisses on backs of hands There are kisses on cheeks Even kisses on demand There is kissing to be clever Kisses blown into the wind Kisses on envelope flaps Kisses with red hot steamy intend There are kisses from puppies Kisses of hello and goodbye Kisses on the forehead Kisses that will make you sigh Kissing babies is heaven A kiss for Grandpa is sublime A kiss from a secret admirer Or a kiss from your valentine Lips were made for kissing There are kisses from lips of wax Kisses that come with a price Kissing booths make you pay a tax I've been kissed by butterflies... now understand ... Im not braggin... Ive even been kissed by a handsome randy dragon Yes...these lips were born to kiss I can think of no better use for a mouth So pucker up sweet Stinky... cuz Im sending all my smooches(and winkies) south!!   SMOOCHES!!! [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 08-27-2001).] |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Beautiful words, Sy. Cor |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, cuz Im sending all my smooches(and winkies) south!! And I'm sending all my smooches and winkies north. You are just one big delight. Love ya Sy Corinne, Thank you sweety. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Oh my I love this transitory bliss....  great write! Charisma |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
So wonderful, but sad that it must be transitory. Well done. Sandra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Charisma, Thank you dear. Catalinamoon, Very true and thank you. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ 'You are the harbor and my port Of my greatest wile' Awwwwwwwwwww ! That is soooooooooooooooooo sweet~ And chuckling here at our very hippie-lippie, JanetMarie~ She be da' Lip-Bomb-Balm~  *Huggles* to ya', Seymour friend~  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
this lingering kiss, this transitory bliss . . . such sweet spice! good work! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey Seymour! Even the transitory ones are great aren't they? This is a great poem and I think all of us have experienced these feelings one time or another. I love the bliss idea.....looking for some of that myself. Write on!! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
excellent work Sy. . . a little bliss is better than none at all eh? great work Sir. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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poetsguild Member
since 2001-08-12
Posts 85Florida |
You have entered in my garden Opened up the door Gave desires without pardon Could I ask for more? Lovely way to thank the gifter. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, You are a neat sweet. Love ya Krawdad, Thank you for the read. Ethome, Enjoyed your reply, thank you. Sven, Thank you for the excellent. Poetguild, Nice comment, thank you. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Wow! A whole lot of kissing goin' on! See what you've inspired!   Sincerely, Regina |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dear Regina, I love both, thank you so much. *L* |
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