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Blood-let

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serenity blaze
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0 posted 08-27-2001 03:58 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for serenity blaze


I try to whisper words like this--
a lick of lips before a kiss...
I try to follow in foot's lead,
all my solitude--unbleed


Give me shuttle to the stars
or just bring me to where you are,
Give me hand to place on breast--
feel this pounding in my chest.


Just the thought of you in me
enough to bring me to my knees.
Give me hand to place on breast--
I promise--I will do the rest.


Say that it's not over yet;
let fingers linger in regret.
Learn to dance, with me, forget--
Like medicine of a blood-let...

© Copyright 2001 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
ethome
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1 posted 08-27-2001 05:20 AM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

Whew! You don't know how fortunate you are that you're a long way away from me.... Being a red blooded healthy North American male words like linger, breast, hand and so on kind of gets me excited....Oh well, sorry, I shouldn't take away from the clever composition of this poem.....Great writing Celeste!

                         "Just the thought of you in me
                         enough to bring me to my knees.
                         Give me hand to place on breast--
                           I promise--I will do the rest."

Ummm!, cough, stutter, stumble, flushed, sweat, breathe heavy, images galore... oh oh sorry! There I go again!
Cpat Hair
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2 posted 08-27-2001 09:30 AM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

Going to have to agree with Ethome... reactions are what they are..and this is sensual in its phrasing and word useage.. nice work... I enjoyed!!
shadow974
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3 posted 08-27-2001 02:40 PM       View Profile for shadow974   Email shadow974   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for shadow974

Wonderfully sensual and enticing,Great write.

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.
ARAB PROVERB

[This message has been edited by shadow974 (edited 08-27-2001).]

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone


4 posted 08-27-2001 03:38 PM       View Profile for catalinamoon   Email catalinamoon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit catalinamoon's Home Page   View IP for catalinamoon

HOW do you do this? Each time I read your work, I am more in awe.
And I agree with the others, this is so hot, it almost sizzles..
Sandra
Janet Marie
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5 posted 08-27-2001 03:46 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Give me shuttle to the stars
or just bring me to where you are,
Give me hand to place on breast--
feel this pounding in my chest.
Just the thought of you in me
enough to bring me to my knees.
Give me hand to place on breast--
I promise--I will do the rest.
Say that it's not over yet;
let fingers linger in regret.
================================

these images and emotions are engraved on me..god how well I know.......
I can still feel the impress of the hand,
still feel the fingers laced......
needless to say I feel every word of this.
beautiful sen.....
you bleed beautiful me twin...
hearthugs me
JamesMichael
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6 posted 08-27-2001 04:00 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

This poem radiates a sensual mood...James
Secret Whisper
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Through the Looking Glass


7 posted 08-27-2001 05:50 PM       View Profile for Secret Whisper   Email Secret Whisper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Secret Whisper

Truly an Eros filled piece. Wonderful.

Quod me nutrit me destruit.
("What nourishes me also destroys me." - latin)

Sven
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8 posted 08-27-2001 07:09 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

ok. . . really playing around with this one aren't you??  

it just leaps off the page and begs to be read. . . well done my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Janet Marie
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9 posted 08-27-2001 10:26 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

was so caught up in butterfly memories and this beauty I forgot to put in me library
serenity blaze
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10 posted 08-28-2001 08:26 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

ethome? what you call my good fortune I have to consider my bad luck!   Thank you for reading, as always you make me smile....and wonder!  

CH---I've already been having way too much fun!   My gratitude to you as well.  

Thanks to shadow for reading as well--I do so enjoy being enjoyed...  

Sandra? aw shucks..'tain't nothin' but a little lust...okay...so it's ALOTTA lust...
thanks lovely, lady!

secret whisper...speak up, will ya?   Thanks for reading!  

James Michael--I'm glad I could return the favor...thanks m'friend, for all the lovely verse YOU have written!

Sven...now how could I leave YOU out?   Thanks as always for your kindness...and OH...damn...HAPPY BELATED BIRTHDAY!!!!!

Janet? I KNEW you'd understand---and yep, talked to "him" the other day, and if I were a better person, his happiness wouldn't have bothered me so much!   HUGS as always and thank you for being here for me---AGAIN.

Now everybody, go out there and writhe something---OMG...I mean WRITE something---OF COURSE!   Thanks all!  
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11 posted 08-28-2001 10:31 PM       View Profile for Masked Intruder   Email Masked Intruder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Masked Intruder

You know that blood letting was pretty much just an excuse to watch blood trickle down your beautiful skin, don't you?  *grins*  I might like to watch that sometime.  

Janet Marie
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12 posted 06-13-2004 02:05 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Doing the birthday bump from me library of rhyme divine Sen keepers.
Its your day..the forums shall be your marquee
 
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