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Charisma
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0 posted 2001-08-26 07:39 PM






View over mountains
peaceable sight of freedom
opportunity
to meet topless earth and sky
in unbounded horizons


Charisma
~*TMP*~
27/08/01



© Copyright 2001 Theresia A. Makatita-Poortman - All Rights Reserved
ethome
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1 posted 2001-08-26 07:42 PM


You are so very good at this type of poetry!....Love this idea...

                                ........."topless earth and sky
                                  in unbounded horizons"

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2 posted 2001-08-26 08:17 PM


Charisma~
You simply charm us time after time with these lovely presentations~

Stunning~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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VAS
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3 posted 2001-08-26 08:24 PM


I, too, like the topless earth and sky idea...this is the Grand Canyon, is it not?

When I was there, the air was so strange, eerie, it was even as if there was a sound in the awesome depth of its silence. Thanks for bringing back the memory.

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4 posted 2001-08-27 03:10 PM


ethome: thank you my friend that you liked it  

Marge: thank you sweet lady for your always kind replies  

Vas: Thank you Vas and glad that I could bring up some memories  

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