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Twenty or Less...#36 |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Flaming lamps light The old-world Streets Midnight clouds Ominously Enveloping The moon Confining him Under Late-night Curses (Copyright 2001 by: MARK V SHELDON) "It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself." |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Stimulates the reader's imagination and leaves the way open to imagine ones own perspective into the mood! Good poem! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Confining him Under Late-night Curses" I know a bit about late-night confining curses, though they are no doubt different from yours. This poem has a nice cadence. Midnitesun |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Eric, thank you -- it's part of the purpose to inspire the imagination of others... Midnitesun: you've intrigued me -- I'd love to hear more about it... -MVS "It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself." |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This places me into an old New Orleans cemetary, with nothing but the moon to light the night. Very visual with so few words. Sandra |
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