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walker
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0 posted 2001-08-26 11:51 AM



One day
far away
you'll never return
I've known all along
that you're not mine
you belong to the world
In the meantime
I offer you
my love
as long as you stay
My heart
lives in fear
of losing you
But I must live with this
Loving you
as long as you want


© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
cpalmer
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1 posted 2001-08-26 11:54 AM


All I can say is WOW!  
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2 posted 2001-08-26 11:55 AM


goodness, I love this   you said it perfectly  
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3 posted 2001-08-26 03:53 PM


oh my I love this too....well done!

Charisma

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4 posted 2001-08-27 12:41 PM


walker---a great poem, a resounding truth to it...but very possibly the saddest confession ever heard.
ramrog
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5 posted 2001-08-27 12:46 PM


well written.  This was personally touching to me.  thanks.
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