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...Rounding.... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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 Rounding continuum known from movement, felt beneath and above calming comes from hoot of owl, then from sky’s mourning dove night has tumbled once again, to dawning’s early blue e’en round whirling change comes continuum in we, too nay do not grow unsteady for this rounding be the only way that we know for continuity |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, A delightful read. *L* |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sy, I am just going in circles today...thank you! {~,^} |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Well, our continuity's in good hands then Enjoyed  Rex |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Love it Karilea, and what a lovely presentation...like it very much!! ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
see me spinning Sunshine??  wonderfully done my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Sunshine I like this very much... Cindi |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
This is beautiful, Sunshine and I want to know how you get the indenting to happen. I don't see you've given any special command but when I try to get successive indentions, everything comes out left margin. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very lovely, Karilea! Soft and lovely! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Loved it! Circles, circles you say, I am dizzy from the speed I am working at here - lol, company coming Tuesday, and it is like I have a bad case of "Martha Stewart", help me!!! Loved this as usual. ~*If you can't say anything nice about someone, don't say anything at all*~ hmmm...they were smart whomever said that! |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Sunshine, this is truly a work of rounded beauty. This is the meaning of coming full circle in something. Every word brings you closer. Sincerely, Regina |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
What a great way to present these things...and Karilea I don't have to tell you... things are things....great write...reminded me of the philosophy of Harry Chapin's song..."All my life's a circle...sunrise to sundown...etc great writing my poet friend! |
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poetsguild Member
since 2001-08-12
Posts 85Florida |
I'm in a spin, too. Shine on. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, the vortex pulls, but the owl and dove halts..very good read, Sissie,,very gentle smile |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Well they do say theres always tomorrow. Nice joining you in you galatic travels. You don't have a choice to die but you do have a choice how you meet it. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sunshine--Just the thought of this pleases me! Hugs! |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Round and round we go and we get the chance to meet great people along the way, Loved it Sunshine. Throw your heart out in front of you |
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