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Fly on wings

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Duncan
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0 posted 08-26-2001 02:30 AM       View Profile for Duncan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Duncan

Fly on wings
From ĎSome lines for youí suggestions by Paula Finn


Fly on wings
forged in winterís ice
it seems so rightly ended
by an anger ever denied
a drama never intended

Fly on wings
born of your own disavowal
towards a goal that has no name
it was never my intention
to hold you to this flame

Fly on wings
of a youthful heart
that will seek to know again
the warmth of a new lover
lying skin to skin

Fly on wings
strengthened by resistance
to a love that didnít fit quite right
leave us both the satisfaction
of this one peaceful night


© Copyright 2001 Duncan - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 08-26-2001 08:16 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


Well, thank Paula for her inspiration! I enjoyed!
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2 posted 08-26-2001 11:22 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

sometimes. . . all you need is that one. . .

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

walker
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3 posted 08-26-2001 11:33 AM       View Profile for walker   Email walker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for walker

Love flees from our hands, but is imprinted on us forever. Great poem!
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4 posted 08-26-2001 11:36 AM       View Profile for Charisma   Email Charisma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Charisma's Home Page   View IP for Charisma

Beautiful!!

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5 posted 08-26-2001 11:49 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Duncan~
wow  
"Fly on wings
born of your own disavowal
towards a goal that has no name
it was never my intention
to hold you to this flame"


this is wonderful!  
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6 posted 08-26-2001 11:53 AM       View Profile for VAS   Email VAS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for VAS

Wonderful!  I especially liked the last stanza!
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Fly on wings
born of your own disavowal
towards a goal that has no name
it was never my intention
to hold you to this flame

Fly on wings
of a youthful heart
that will seek to know again
the warmth of a new lover
lying skin to skin
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oh I like this very much ...
very cool poem and rhyme scheme Duncan
softly sensual, very cool write indeed.
this goes in my library
jm

Feels like Im dancin with truth and wisdom
Precious rhythm you are my guide
These days are sacred, my heart is humble
Oh warrior show me thy light

Paula Finn
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8 posted 08-27-2001 01:57 AM       View Profile for Paula Finn   Email Paula Finn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Paula Finn

Oh how wonderful...this from a line of mine ...I am honoured Duncan
Janet Marie
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Fly on wings
born of your own disavowal
towards a goal that has no name
it was never my intention
to hold you to this flame


Fly on wings
of a youthful heart
that will seek to know again
the warmth of a new lover
lying skin to skin
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was looking in me library and found this treasure...
I KNEW you understood the moth motto
passing shadows
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10 posted 01-12-2003 05:05 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

I need to read more stuff by you...I'm in that kind of mood.
Susan Caldwell
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11 posted 10-25-2006 01:35 PM       View Profile for Susan Caldwell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan Caldwell

I remember when Duncan wrote...things were just a little bit more right then.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

 
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