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darabeth
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since 2001-02-17
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0 posted 2001-08-26 12:40 PM


I had a tear stream down my cheek.
My future has gone from blah to bleek.
Not knowing why you're always gone.
Will I see you before the dawn?

Why don't you spend your time with me?
What have I done?I just don't see.
I try to do the best I can.
My best,you never understand.

I feel I'm nothing without you here.
I just want you to hold me near.
I keep my feelings bottled up inside.
All that's left is foolish pride.

So as I go to rest my head,
I feel worthless,wish I were dead.
I gave you all my heart and soul.
And loved you more than you could know.
             Dara Beth

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Duncan
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since 2001-08-07
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1 posted 2001-08-26 12:50 PM


Not the way we think love should be, but the way it sometimes is...you captured it well.
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2 posted 2001-08-26 11:41 AM


pride?  well. . . no. . . just a love. . . gone wrong. . .

you share the feelings well. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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