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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-08-25 08:59 PM


From nature's beautiful tapestry
we have painted our own masterpiece
displaying our love on canvas
Two lovers walking barefoot
along the sand under
the brilliant blue sky
We have painted our picture with
such intensity and passion
from our palette of many colors

You kiss me by the waters edge
and whisper words of love
which is music to my ears
Your tender touch on my skin
awakens feelings from deep within
I return your warm passionate kiss
which I fill with my want and desire
sending it directly to
the door of your heart

As the day nears its end
we repaint the sky with
shades of azure and pink
and edge it with gold
We add some seagulls to our canvas
as they fly towards the horizon
in search of the setting sun

On our final canvas we paint
a moonlit night reserved for lovers
as their passions and desires
unfold beneath the seductive
light of the moon

Two star-crossed lovers
with eyes only for one another
arms entwined
passions ignited
surrendering to love
as they climb the highest peak of desire
and reach the summit of love

Suetang

© Copyright 2001 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2001-08-25 09:04 PM


You're a very romantic poet and you present romance very well!  You have captured the essence of what we are all trying to write about when it comes to romance.  It's a subject that we can write about forever and the feelings and images never die....well done!
Chelsea~
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since 2001-02-09
Posts 260
Ontario, CANADA
2 posted 2001-08-25 09:45 PM


suetang,
a lovely poem!

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3 posted 2001-08-25 10:22 PM


SueTang~
Just a lovely word-picture~
I so enjoy reading your poetry~
Thank you for sharing~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Saunni
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777
West Virginia
4 posted 2001-08-26 12:17 PM


Suetang, this is sooooo romantic and beautiful. I sure love this.  

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

rwood
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since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793
Tennessee
5 posted 2001-08-26 08:13 AM


Two star-crossed lovers
with eyes only for one another
arms entwined
passions ignited
surrendering to love

This, a silhouette, rendered even if black and white is most beautiful. The charm of your romance shines.

Sincerely,
Regina

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...
6 posted 2001-08-26 02:19 PM


...a recipe for a perfect day...

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS


Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
7 posted 2001-08-26 09:37 PM


I am always so very humbled by all of your lovely comments afforded to me. Thank you all so very much.  Take care.....Sue

Suetang

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