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traveling art. . . |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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moving through the morning gray, there they sat as though on display mother and daughter, perfect copies of the same genetic mold, a work of art that could not be made by human hands, symmetrical of line and unique in form breathing as though of the same body, head laid against heart, arms surround as dreams were shared behind shaded eyes, tuft of ashen hair falls softly as if to shield those dreams from a world that has forgotten the dreams of its children as the grayness became white, we continued on towards the day, and then, as if knowing, the smaller statue awoke, rubbed the sleep from its eyes, and smiled. . . ------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
what a lovely image you have presented...and the line about the world forgetting a child's dreams...powerful! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sven, A nice write and I enjoyed the read. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very nice imagery. Good work.. Sandra |
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citizenx Member
since 2001-07-31
Posts 189motorcade |
breathing as though of the same body, head laid against heart, arms surround as dreams were shared behind shaded eyes, tuft of ashen hair falls softly as if to shield those dreams from a world that has forgotten the dreams of its children Some wonderful images here. Enjoyed this one alot "the blizzard of the world has crossed the threshold and it has overturned |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
I like this Sven. Different in form and a whole lot like art. Good job! Deb  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ This is positively beautiful~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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rascalx Senior Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 590Florence, SC, USA |
Love the images you have painted with your words; well done! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
VAS, thank you. . . I'm glad that you enjoyed. . . Sy, thank you my friend. . . always good to see you. . . Sandra, thank you for reading my friend. . . I hoped that this would be liked. . .citizenx, thank you for enjoying and stopping by. . . glad to see you. . . Deb, thank you. . . I've been working on some new things. . . Marge, thanks for reading. . . Jeff, that's what I was going for. . . thank you. . . ----------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
This took me into some dreamy drifting..... and at the end I awoke.... "rubbed the sleep from (my) eyes, and smiled. . ." Beautiful.....and exquisite..... Thank you ******************** "Oh...me!Oh Life! |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Very nice write! I loved it Cindi |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Very beautiful, your art. Thanks. |
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