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St. Peter's Torch
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St. Peter's Torch |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I have pills-- a calendar-- a line-up of relief... pretty blues to bring me up and pinks of sweet surcease. I have powder in a jar... lucidity in sniff of straw-- I have talent---so they say... I wonder will it go away? Am I describing all you feel or just the painting of surreal? Tell me, as I twirl my skirt I'm not mere laughter in the dirt? TELL ME...give me brave critique-- the difference of concrete street or feet that stick to July's Tar-- trap fireflies within a jar; and call it "The St. Peter's Torch" as I dance upon death's porch? |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
TELL ME...give me brave critique-- the difference of concrete street or feet that stick to July's Tar-- trap fireflies within a jar; Only the difference 'tween north and south, a heart that hears and any else. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I have talent---so they say... I wonder will it go away? ================================== No it wont...... not as long as its given the love and respect it needs and deserves... as long as it treated with cherish and nurtured it will continue to grow Talent like yours in born...God given... instilled, inherited.... its only when we dont protect it and respect it that it tests us and silences us. Because "it" knows we arent respecting and protecting ourselves(usually from ourselves) ("my own worst enemy is me") The muse is fragile in its powerful beauty. So is love and trust... Much like the heart and spirit... they only shine when shined upon. (tis way too early for such mothy wisdom) (I aint even had me tea yet)  love you me Feels like Im dancin with truth and wisdom |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Duncan---I don't know you know you quite well yet, but I appreciate your understanding of me... and Jan....oh me twin? how can I ever thank you? You make me feel like a poet, yanno that? I love you. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
I enjoy surreal, confined within one's imagination I enjoy your thoughts, often confined beyond my imagination Always enjoy reading serenity  Rex |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
 THATS BECAUSE YOU ARE ARE POET!! (a mardi-gras poet no less) and you KNOW the admire and respect I have for that. now send me some rhyme water damn it the spicy cajun kind (rofl)     Feels like Im dancin with truth and wisdom Precious rhythm you are my guide These days are sacred, my heart is humble Oh warrior show me thy light [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 08-25-2001).] |
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citizenx Member
since 2001-07-31
Posts 189motorcade |
I have talent---so they say... I wonder will it go away? Never, nope.... and I for one am grateful for that fact. Your words leap off the screen, whispering truths and mysteries. Continue to dazzle us. Seren, hugs. "the blizzard of the world has crossed the threshold and it has overturned |
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