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rwood
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0 posted 2001-08-24 06:59 PM



There upon the mirror of captured rainfall
As the winds cease and the image quells
Beauty stretches upside down, in lot of
Majesty in snow capped peaks and sward

The sky could not be any bluer in radiant azure
Heaven's casting of light, lazed in development
Processed in photosensitive remember

A watercolor reminder within reach
Reflecting the lure of higher ground
While the trout try desperately to fling themselves
Through the magic portal, tasting both worlds.

© Copyright 2001 Regina Wood - All Rights Reserved
MARK V SHELDON
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1 posted 2001-08-24 07:05 PM


While the trout try desperately to fling themselves
Through the magic portal, tasting both worlds.


...those are two very cool lines!  A "Kirilean Moment", to be sure.

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS


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2 posted 2001-08-24 11:26 PM


RWood~
What a wonderful piece to enjoy~
Thank you so much for sharing such lovely work.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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