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Decaflame
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since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

0 posted 2001-08-24 10:29 AM

Think again

see, you, there,
in the distance
floating,
grays mist, between the
shadows, fingering
trees’ limbs,
lacing more
gracefully than
Spanish moss,
moving slowly, rolling
strolling along
curves and valleys
o’er the green

meld into it, and
feel the dewdrops of
it’s kiss, warm

you only thought
mists were cool…

photo courtesy danheller.com

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-08-24 10:53 AM

mmmm, I love the fog

this is wonderful

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2001-08-24 10:54 AM

very nice... I enjoyed this!!!

good imagery and an ending to tie it up...

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

3 posted 2001-08-24 12:39 PM

Now, fog combined WITH Spanish moss truly is a pretty sight, though this is such a pretty poem even witout the moss

Nice work, Deca!

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

4 posted 2001-08-24 02:43 PM

Yanno, without the graphic I saw the picture (now that is poetry) but with it, wow Decaflame! I am a sucker for pictures yanno

This was just lovely.

~*If you can't say anything nice about someone, don't say anything at all*~ hmmm...they were smart whomever said that!

Logan
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since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

5 posted 2001-08-24 08:16 PM

In the mists of time, all is possible, what a wonderful display of all..very gentle smile

citizenx
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since 2001-07-31

Posts 189
motorcade

6 posted 2001-08-25 06:36 PM

I know these like of scenes, perfectly captured, beautiful and haunting

"the blizzard of the world has crossed the threshold and it has overturned
the order of the soul" leonard cohen

rascalx
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since 1999-08-25

Posts 590
Florence, SC, USA

7 posted 2001-08-25 07:55 PM

Who would've thought "mist" could be almost sexy? lol Very well written, great imagery, and the graphic perfectly complements the poem.

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

8 posted 2001-08-26 08:20 AM

I'm feeling the warmth of this mist.. and I like it...

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

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Somewhere... out there...

9 posted 2001-08-28 03:32 PM

Decaflame-
   I'm enjoying this mist very much!
   Nicely penned!

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

shadow974
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 636
Michigan

10 posted 2001-08-28 03:38 PM

Very nicly done, enjoyed.

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.
ARAB PROVERB

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2001-08-31 03:12 AM

Enjoyed your poem...James

cottage
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 138

12 posted 2001-08-31 03:27 AM

such an enchanting write!

passing shadows
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displaced

13 posted 2001-08-31 04:10 AM

like it a lot

Marge Tindal

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14 posted 2001-08-31 04:23 AM

DecaFlame~
Oh yeah ....
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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