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Unworthy..................a sonnet
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Unworthy..................a sonnet |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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However do I explain, I want more? How do I describe this need to adore? How shall I speak of this, my heart’s desire? How will I shower thee with my admire? I will sing to you, of oceans, so deep I will paint for you, eyes that never weep I shall recite for you, poems of love I offer to thee, all that dreams are of Giving to you undying devotion Promising only, sweetest emotion Worshiping you upon unworthy knees Hoping only, that this bounty doth please Take from me, all I am able to give All my love for you, as long as I live ~SEA~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
My dear lady... for these things a man would indeed do anything... for wha else is there in life when all is said and done but love to keep us from the insanity of alone? Beautiful write SEA... beautiful indeed. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
From such devotion true love is surely woven.. Very nice, SEA...  |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
aww...how utterly romantic. I'm sure this is an offer that can't be refused!  Lovely write... ~Krista  "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Ah...the romantic speaks |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Susan, What a nice surprise to come across on one of my infrequent visits to Passions. Just lovely! What a lucky man your husband is and what a lucky man I am to call you my sweet friend. Thank you! ((((hugs))))Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Sea, this is so romantic, totally awesome. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sea, An offer he surely can't resist. Well done. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now there is an offer no man can refuse, and what an absolutely beautiful sonnet SEA. ~*If you can't say anything nice about someone, don't say anything at all*~ hmmm...they were smart whomever said that! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
However do I explain, I want more? How do I describe this need to adore? How shall I speak of this, my heart’s desire? How will I shower thee with my admire? ======================== oh yeah....youre getting way too good at these sonnets... and this is perfect...love the language and poetic phrasing very cool Sea-girlie... keep them sonnets coming...I dig em  |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Beautiful romantic write SEA. Your husband is a wealthy man!! Throw your heart out in front of you |
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Kay Vibbert Junior Member
since 2001-08-25
Posts 35Indiana |
Your husband is very blessed indeed, how many years SEA, may you always feel this way! Kay (aka/Irish Rose) |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
goodness! thank you all very much Michael, I am the lucky one, for a husband like mine, and for a sweet friend like you!! Janet, I am loving these sonnets, so glad Interloper taught me how much fun they can be! when do I get to see one from your magic pen?!love to you all ~me "I know you, I walked with you once upon a dream" |
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