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Cpat Hair
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0 posted 2001-08-24 09:13 AM


The breeze through open window
Now cool and damp from the rain
Falling in soft patter splat
On tin roof above our heads
Wafts across exposed bareness
Of your leg, half in, half out
Of the sheet pulled over shoulder mounds

And I watch you stir

Not wanting eyes to open
The pillow now brought to play
Covers head as feet wiggle
In squirm to find shelter
And you settle again

I watch your form

And know underneath it all
The expanse of skin
The silk smooth touch of hair
You are dreaming

I wonder
Is it ever of me?


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Decaflame
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1 posted 2001-08-24 09:20 AM



You are "McKuen-ing" again...yes, you are, so don't argue....

because I'm enjoying it WAY too much!

Nan
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2 posted 2001-08-24 09:21 AM


If I had to venture a guess - I'd give you a resounding... YEP - Likely so...
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3 posted 2001-08-24 10:55 AM


SIGH...........
this is sooooooo perfect  

SmittenKitten
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4 posted 2001-08-24 10:59 AM


awww Tenderly written....I would say yes as well!
~Krista  

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh

VAS
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5 posted 2001-08-24 11:20 AM


heh heh very nice, and surely so, o Hair


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6 posted 2001-08-24 11:27 AM


This is enchanting, CH.  
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