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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-08-24 04:18 AM



Loving Both

there are two men
whom I adore
can’t decide
which one
I love more
this could be bad
yes I know
but before
I knew it
feelings grow
one has crystal
eyes of blue
with a flash
see straight
through you
the other has
eyes of brown
with feet planted
on the ground
a melting smile
they have each
new lessons to me
both bound to teach
what a great life
this human trick
no need to choose
loving them both
no need to pick
so they both
shall share
part of
my heart
total love
and my sons
no depart

  
Brian


Michael


"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet)  Shakespeare


[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (edited 08-24-2001).]

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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2001-08-24 04:21 AM


He's handsome, Helen....I can understand...hmmm do they by any chance write poetry???? OKAY, OKAY, JUST KIDDING...
(but they really ARE cute!   ) oops, and I can't choose either...

[This message has been edited by serenity (edited 08-24-2001).]

1slick_lady
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2 posted 2001-08-24 04:23 AM


oops michaels pic didn't go on at first ...but he's here now  lol
nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2001-08-24 04:41 AM


wonderful Helen...your words and pictures

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Sven
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4 posted 2001-08-24 11:30 AM


wonderful helen. . .we should all be so lucky. . .



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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641
Calif.
5 posted 2001-08-25 10:48 AM


Helen,
This is beautiful.... All kids open our hearts to a endless love force... at least its that way for me

           Thank You
         ~~~Connie~~~

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25
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Virginia
6 posted 2001-08-25 02:07 PM


lovely write here !! well done...  


lol @ mrs. robinson.... er, serenity.... geesh  

VAS
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since 2000-11-16
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Oregon
7 posted 2001-08-25 03:01 PM


lovely write
lovely sons
yes they are
the handsome ones


DonFurr
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since 2001-01-01
Posts 172
Monticello IN
8 posted 2001-08-26 02:43 AM


The love of a mother has never been expressed better Dear Lady.
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