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X Angel
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0 posted 2001-08-24 01:01 AM


you make me think of lying in soft green fields
back to the earth and heart to the sky

you make me think of a haunting melody
that plays over the pages of time

you make me think of wild stormy seas
that swallows sailors unaware

you make me think of gently falling snow
covering everything in its mantle so pure

you make me think of northbound birds
drawn towards their fair homelands

you make me think of the timelessness of true love
you make me think of forever
fairytales
happy endings

you make me think


© Copyright 2001 Heather Walters - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2001-08-24 01:09 AM


XAngel~

'you make me think of the timelessness of true love
you make me think of forever'


I just love that forever stuff~
So good to see you posting, my friend~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                   noles1@totcon.com            

Colin
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2 posted 2001-08-24 01:12 AM


Well my love, I think you make me think I like it. In fact, I don't think I need to think about it.   I love it!  

Suburbia is where the developer bulldozes out the trees, then names the streets after them. - Bill Vaughan

VAS
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3 posted 2001-08-24 01:20 AM


lovely thoughts to visit
Temptress
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4 posted 2001-08-24 01:50 AM


*sigh*
I miss your work, yanno?  
I LOVE this though.  

Don't gain my affections then cover my eyes. Don't sweep me off my feet then fail to catch me before I hit the floor.

ramrog
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5 posted 2001-08-24 01:56 AM


very nice. I like how those thoughts are not all happy romantic thoughts.  Kind of hits home that way

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2001-08-24 04:25 AM


Nice thoughts...James
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
7 posted 2001-08-24 04:37 AM


sweetly written..I  enjoyed your thoughts

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Nan
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8 posted 2001-08-24 08:26 AM


I like happy endings...

BIG HUGS



Suetang
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Melbourne, Australia
9 posted 2001-08-24 06:58 PM


This was so beautifully written and so much enjoyed.  Take care.....Sue

Suetang

Poet deVine
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10 posted 2001-08-24 10:07 PM


It's so nice to read you again!!!! This is wonderful..it made ME think..
kaile
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11 posted 2001-08-26 07:57 AM


wonderful images...and powerful ending
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