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0 posted 2001-08-23 09:14 PM




"Sigh"kus #4
By: Noah Eaton
8/23/01

Star Kiss

I'll hold you tonight
Amidst this starry evening
Making love to you


Why Fireflies Glow

Yellow flares cascade
Fireflies in the night sky
Casting loves passions


Hidden Heavens

Transcending our dreams
With a love so delightful
Finding lost heavens




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1 posted 2001-08-23 11:05 PM


Beautiful hiakus Noah    each one describing a special moment of love
~Krista  

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2 posted 2001-08-24 02:57 AM


Beautiful work, and nice sequence too.

~*If you can't say anything nice about someone, don't say anything at all*~ hmmm...they were smart whomever said that!

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3 posted 2001-08-24 05:51 AM


Love all three, Noah

~Wynter

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4 posted 2001-08-24 08:32 AM


very nice work Noah!! enjoyed these a great deal..keep them coming!!!



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