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Open Poetry #15

The Underminer (Senryu)

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

0 posted 2001-08-23 08:43 PM

Was your betrayal
very lucrative for you?
You Mine Pyrite Well

RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

1 posted 2001-08-23 08:51 PM

Hopefully the false Judas found no buyers. You pen a stinging consumer alert.

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

2 posted 2001-08-23 11:14 PM

honesty
not mined
found in
time
a fool
and their gold
both lose
shine

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

3 posted 2001-08-24 12:42 PM

amazing senryu...speaks reams

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2001-08-24 01:22 AM

RWood~
Ahhhh ... perfect !
Nicely done~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

5 posted 2001-08-24 08:44 AM

very nicely done!

I enjoyed as usual

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

6 posted 2001-08-24 06:53 PM

One would have to be a fool to betray such gold...

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS

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