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Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182
Netherlands

0 posted 2001-08-23 07:17 PM


I'm sitting here
eating little prunes
thinking wether I will write a poem
or go to bed
The sanest thing to do
is going to bed
heavy day tomorrow
both my sisters
coming over
preparing
the party
for my mother's
birthday on Saturday
bought so many
bottles of wine
and other stuff
don't know
how many people
will come
maybe thirty
but likely seventy
how does one
prepare for that
baking
goodies
I like those
preparations
both my sisters
are stressed
silly girls
I'm home for about
four weeks now
should be
my vacation but
I've got ischias
or however that's called
in English, pain in my
leg, coming from
my back
have it every year
no big deal
but it was supposed
to be my vacation
silly leg, or back
Oh well, in my job
I get my days back
so who's complaining
Talk too much again
don't you bother to
read it all
Wanna know what
birthdaypresent we bought
for my mother?
A computerchair!!
so she can sit comfortable
while computering
Yes her body will be ninety
her spirit however
will stay young forever
I printed all your replies
to my Mom's birthdaypoem
she will be thrilled
Oh, too much babbling I did
should have choosen my bed
Sorry, see you, sleep well

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

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Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
1 posted 2001-08-23 07:52 PM


Titia~
You can send us a sweet 'babble' anytime, sweet poet~

What excitement planning for Mom's birthday !
You MUST share many photos with us after the event ! !

Goodnight, dear poetess~
Love you~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                   noles1@totcon.com            

rwood
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since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793
Tennessee
2 posted 2001-08-25 10:29 AM


I hope the day is a wonderful one. And this poem is just the anticipation of that event. I found it quite charming! I think your mom will love her present. Tell us about the day!God Bless!  

Sincerely,
Regina

Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
3 posted 2001-08-25 11:01 AM


Yep - I like your babblings... It sounds like life - the real thing... Stuff that's happening...
Kay Vibbert
Junior Member
since 2001-08-25
Posts 35
Indiana
4 posted 2001-08-25 10:34 PM


Titia, darling girl, I prefer "rambling"
sounds more romantic don't ya think?

Kay (aka/Irish Rose)

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182
Netherlands
5 posted 2001-08-26 05:41 PM


Marge, just looked in my Webster and found out that 'babbling' is a real word, ha ha.
Overhere we use almost the same word for the same meaning 'babbelen'. Thanks sweetie, I sometimes need to do that, just babble.

Rwood, I will tell you about it as soon I have the pictures. Thanks.

Nan, always glad to see you, yep babbling is just a moments thought put to paper.

Kay, I think I do both (LOL)

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

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