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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-08-23 03:32 PM



Carousels Of White

~*Marge Tindal*~

Around the forum in songs of delight
Spinning the penning of LadyInWhite
Caught up in the chime of rhyme
She'll catch you every time

Reaching for that elusive brass ring
Stretching imagination on flight of wing
Yes, I hear the calliope
playing with sweet songs of thee~


*Guess who this one's for~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                   noles1@totcon.com            

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1 posted 2001-08-23 03:40 PM



Why Marge, you should know that the brass ring isn't so elusive when tenacity and stubborness to find the bright rests in one's soul of white...

darn it girl, this is a keeper, but of course! And I wouldn't trade it for just any horse, but one, that of which is of many colors...

Oh I so enjoyed!  Thank you!

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2 posted 2001-08-23 03:50 PM


This is such a nice thing to write about a fellow poet.     The first time I opened this the music file crashed my computer, LOL  
But I came back, yep it was worth it.  

You eat the brains of an old, wise man.

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3 posted 2001-08-23 04:01 PM


A fine tribute by a great poet lady to another
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4 posted 2001-08-23 04:02 PM


Nicely done Marge. Good metaphor too!  
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5 posted 2001-08-23 04:31 PM


How delightful! Love the music too.
Your poetry always makes me smile!  

Hugs,
Deb

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6 posted 2001-08-23 05:30 PM


Oh Marge you should have seen Tori's face when this came on!  She ran from clear across the living room LOL, now you did it!  The fair is on here, and I promised to take her next week.  This was delightful - send me a cheque to cover expenses at the PNE please LOL  
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7 posted 2001-08-23 05:30 PM


Your words always ring so true..very lovely...

~Wynter

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8 posted 2001-08-24 12:22 PM


LadyInWhite~
My pleasure to honor you in rhyme~
Glad you like it !

Allan~
Thanks for taking two rides !

InterLoper~
Thanks from both of us, I'm sure~

Elizabeth~
Thank you for the read and reply.

BloomingRose~
I like grabbing those smiles~

Mysteria~
LOL ... Oh boy !  Going to the fair !
Alright ! ! !  HI TORI~

Wynter~
Thanks, hon.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                   noles1@totcon.com            

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9 posted 2001-08-24 05:02 AM



Marge-
   Ok...I give up.  Who's it for? LOL!
   I absolutely love this, and it's
   perfect for our Lady In White.
   Wonderful!

   hugs,
   ~vicky



  

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



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10 posted 2001-08-26 05:17 AM


Vicky~
LOL .... I'm NOT telling~
You crack me up, girl~
Now ... get OFF the merry-go-round-round-round-round-round-round-round-round-round-round-round-round-round~

You are becoming a dizzy blonde!
Lova you~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                   noles1@totcon.com            

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