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GracefullyPoetic
Junior Member
since 2001-08-23
Posts 14
AZ, USA

0 posted 2001-08-23 01:14 PM


Love walked in


When I saw you


My heart didn't know


Just what to do


I looked at you


And there you were


Where my heart would take me


I was not sure.


I took a risk


Upon loving you


But then of course


What else could I do?


I loved you then


And I love you now


Surround me love


With your words


With your voice


With the love that never changes.


More lovely than a sea-swept storm


You came into my life


Removing all fear and strife


You were my anchor


The heart of my soul


Each day


Your words


Are what kept me whole.


Even when we are far apart


I know that we are still one in heart.....




This poem is lovingly dedicated to my long-time friend & boyfriend Jonathan, that I have known for almost 11 years.




© Copyright 2001 Heather - All Rights Reserved
Cpat Hair
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Member Patricius
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-08-23 01:20 PM


a very nice dedication indeed... nice to meet you and welcome to PIP.

I enjoyed the read and the thoughts.


Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
2 posted 2001-08-23 01:22 PM



Heather, welcome to Passions!  A tribute to a longtime friend is one of the best ways to make an entrance into your new poetic home.  Please check your e-mail for a special message!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2001-08-23 01:38 PM


"Even when we are far apart
I know that we are still one in heart."
Nice expression of the feeling of love...James

cpalmer
Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977
Phoenix, Az
4 posted 2001-08-23 01:58 PM


Grace
This is just beautiful...Welcome to passions...you have a wonderful way of writing! Hope you like it here!   Another Arizonan I see!!! welcome!
Cindi

God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
5 posted 2001-08-23 02:05 PM


Gracefully,
Welcome and I enjoyed.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
6 posted 2001-08-23 03:48 PM


Hello and welcome! Very sweet and tender write.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

vandana
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Member Patricius
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463
USA
7 posted 2001-08-23 05:17 PM


enjoyed this much welcome to passions look forward for more
Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

8 posted 2001-08-23 10:31 PM


Hello and welcome to Passions. I hope to read more...


GracefullyPoetic
Junior Member
since 2001-08-23
Posts 14
AZ, USA
9 posted 2001-08-23 10:40 PM


Thank you for all for your lovely compliments on my poetry, and for welcoming me to "Passions In Poetry." You are all wonderful poets, and I will continue to let you know that by critiquing your poems. Thanks again, and God bless every poet here, and in the world!


          


SmittenKitten
Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet
10 posted 2001-08-23 11:00 PM


You are true to your name....you have written with grace     

A big   ~!*WELCOME*!~   to you!
~Krista  


"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh

[This message has been edited by SmittenKitten (edited 08-23-2001).]

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