To Dare All---for Tom with all my love

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Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

0 posted 2001-08-23 01:07 AM

With trembling fingers
and soft gentle sighs, we touch
and it all begins.

We learn with each kiss
How far love can go, how high
Til we reach heaven.

In each others arms
Not falling, but flying free
A seed cast adrift.

To dance in the rain
To soar on the wings of love
To find the path home.

We dream together
Of love that has yet to be
Because we dare all.

I love you

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

1 posted 2001-08-23 01:08 AM

CAN I GET AN OOOOOOOOO YUH!!

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

2 posted 2001-08-23 01:10 AM

Don't you just love beginnings? You've written it perfectly.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-08-23 11:48 AM

Paula~
To take the dare can be so breathtakingly rewarding~
Wonderfully written~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2001-08-24 04:13 PM

Very nice Paula...James

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

5 posted 2001-09-05 09:29 PM

Great read Paula.this is so good. I wish you both all the happiness in the world.
alan

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2001-09-05 09:49 PM

Beautiful Paula !!

~Time has cast a spell on you
so you won't ever forget me~

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

7 posted 2001-09-06 09:42 PM

We learn with each kiss
How far love can go, how high
Til we reach heaven.

I like this part very much! you go girl!

<3 RosePetal

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

8 posted 2001-09-07 06:03 AM

Wow!
What a beautiful magic love poem!
Keep up the good work!

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

9 posted 2001-09-07 09:05 AM

All smiles for the two of you!

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

10 posted 2001-09-07 09:20 AM

Beautiful!

The Lonely Stranger
Member

since 1999-06-18

Posts 361
Upstate, NY, USA

11 posted 2001-09-07 11:40 AM

Whole piece - Bravo !

This stanza :

"To dance in the rain
To soar on the wings of love
To find the path home."

Left me breathless. Simple yet joyously strong.

No one ever listened themselves into trouble.

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

12 posted 2001-09-08 12:40 PM

Wow! Excellent work here Paula!

"Let me pierce the realm of glamour
So I know just what I am." ~ Van Morrison

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