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Elisa's Eyes

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wayoutwalt
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Elisa’s Eyes

Life was living never loving
Until I saw Elisa’s eyes
Dancing daring never swaying
Perfect sight seen crystallized

If she showed up at the doorway
All the eyes would move to her
And I’d never miss a motion
To the one her eyes preferred

Eyes like Icarus seeking amber
Eyes like indigo, sapphire, azure
Eyes lavished in stunning adornment
Eyes luminous in searing allure

Eyes that somehow found me lost
Eyes I think I’ve always known
Like the sun it seems fore’er
Eyes that are my cornerstone

© Copyright 2001 Walt Burns - All Rights Reserved
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OH YES!!!!! The eyes have it...you are awesome Walt
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Now this is love.
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Walt~
This is tenderly BEAUTIFUL~
You romanticize her *eyes* into *sighs*
Oh, so loverly~
~*Marge*~

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a WOW from you is a worthy read, any time...
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enjoyed this
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my Eyes agree.... I enjoyed!!!
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If you look really closely iinto my eyes, you can see the reflection is you. Thank you, Walter. You're my love.
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this was a sight for sore or bright eyes, wonderful read, terribly romantic, endearing
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Elisa is one lucky wayoutlady...
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Very sweet Walt..loved it..

              ~Victoria~
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FANTASTIC writing Walt...
Hugs2uPoetFriend...
*~coco~*
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Beautiful.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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Awwww .... just gotta this one~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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