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Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
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0 posted 2001-08-23 12:41 PM


I dream you in a sunlit field,
surrounded by flowers,
basking in the glow...
the sun touching your face
as I long to do.
Kissing it softly.
Your touch is like wind,
slide over me,
open my eyes and let me see...
see myself in your eyes
all I can be
all you make of me.
The sun in your  eyes,
makes me think of cloudless skies and faraway rendezvous',
filled with sighs.
And the heart skips a beat in time,
listening to hidden rhyme,
imagining a far off clime.
Sinlit beaches and starry nights,
wordlessly mumbling "hold me tight"
and the gentlest touch of lips on mine.
Kisses salty with ocean spray,
stolen kisses as day fades away,
crimson and shadows soft on your skin
love through the night
to begin again.
In the dawning.


[This message has been edited by Paula Finn (edited 08-23-2001).]

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Duncan
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since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455

1 posted 2001-08-23 12:59 PM


Great poem...I really liked this part

Your touch is like wind,
slide over me,
open my eyes and let me see...
see myself in your eyes
all I can be
all you make of me.


wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
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2 posted 2001-08-23 01:04 AM


can i say aww shucks or is this artistic embellishment yadda yadda... you go two!
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