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BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09
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0 posted 2001-08-22 03:58 PM


Droplets Of Illusion
~*~
The waning moon cools
droplets of illusion
from the man I love

Yet the fire burns
from elusive dreams
that won't die

Some dark night
a thousand stars
will shine on heavens stairway  
a place
where you'll never fade away


BloomingRose


© Copyright 2001 DebraS. - All Rights Reserved
Decaflame
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1 posted 2001-08-22 04:32 PM



Deb, this is beautiful....

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2001-08-22 04:39 PM


Beautifully written and presented! Left me wanting more. Great write!   Nancy Lee.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

poetsguild
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since 2001-08-12
Posts 85
Florida
3 posted 2001-08-22 08:08 PM


Yet the fire burns
from elusive dreams
that won't die



Know that feeling well.
Nicely done, BloomingRose.

rwood
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since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793
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4 posted 2001-08-23 06:27 AM


Some dark night
a thousand stars
will shine on heavens stairway  
a place
where you'll never fade away


A glorious place to be. A wonderful read. Thank you!

Sincerely,
Regina

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2001-08-23 12:02 PM


BloomingRose~
Your thoughts cascade so gently~
Beautiful~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                   noles1@totcon.com            

Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26
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Regina SK; Canada
6 posted 2001-08-23 12:49 PM


Bloomingrose--
Lovely thoughts and imagery.  Enjoyed the read.

GracefullyPoetic
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since 2001-08-23
Posts 14
AZ, USA
7 posted 2001-08-23 12:54 PM


This poem was lovely! I loved the words of this poem. They were very heartfelt and sincere. I loved the feelings you poured into every line of this poetry. Someone surely inspired you to write such a beautiful piece!


Blooming Rose: You make a wonderful poet! Please don't stop posting your words;for they are straight from the heart, and should be shared.


         --Heather

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092
Florida
8 posted 2001-08-23 05:42 PM


Deca~ Thank you

Nancy~ Thank you, so glad you enjoyed.


Poetsguild~ Sometimes we all go through this. Thanks for reading.

Regina~ Yes, it most certainly would be. Thank you.

Marge~ And you always have nice things to say. I thank you.

Poe~ Thanks so much.


Heather~ So sweet of you. Thank you.

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