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walker
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since 2001-02-11
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0 posted 2001-08-22 03:34 PM



Far from myself
I've loooked for you
You remain hidden
distance from me
Occasionally you
show yourself
Unwanted masks
that lie
Sudden changes
that accomplish nothing
but loneliness
And everytime you remember me
and come back
you leave me
with less pride

[This message has been edited by walker (edited 08-22-2001).]

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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2001-08-22 06:33 PM


This is so sad, but only we can figure out why we repeat negative patterns of behavior and why we allow others to do the same at our expense. Funny thing, it just keeps happening until WE LEARN. Thanks for the ponder. Enjoyed.  
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Member Rara Avis
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2 posted 2001-08-22 06:36 PM


Sorrowful write.  Good work, though. Write on.

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