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Decaflame
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0 posted 2001-08-22 01:01 PM


Translation Please

to read,
then study again
interpreting
lines, translating
conversions, until,
coming to
biographied
highlightings,
which indicate
only
extremely educated
need
pen
poems

thus published
goes s/he

ah…

well…

I shall take on
the mantle of Reader

penning in
private

my heart’s

content

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1 posted 2001-08-22 01:38 PM


translation not needed here... clearly presented and understood. Nicely done
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2 posted 2001-08-22 01:47 PM


If I am reading this right I kind of disagree with this - some of the best poetry comes from the minds of those with no formal education, only "street smarts". Well the kind I like anyway.  Hmmm...you have me thinking this morning on this one, which is a good write.
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with you
3 posted 2001-08-22 02:20 PM


I don't like having to try and figure out what someone means, if it is too far out there, I just forget it. LOL but I liked this  
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4 posted 2001-08-22 02:38 PM


What SEA said  
I will hae to admit I spend far too much time contemplating my navel with regard to som works here by some of my favorite poets ...  

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