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Open Poetry #15

Fire and Ice

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-08-22 12:59 PM

Fire and Ice

knowing
the danger
I still
place the warmth
of my tongue
to the frozen metal
fussed
connected we are
fire and ice

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

1 posted 2001-08-22 01:28 PM

This sizzles....

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2001-08-22 01:38 PM

nice one oh slick one...as usual...

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2001-08-22 05:50 PM

Well! That COULD "smart" yanno...(personally, I spoke with a lisp for MONTHS)

loved thith one...grin

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2001-08-22 06:11 PM

not frozen metal
just an attitude you see
you have melted it
now lips can brush lips again
now tongues can search and entwine

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

5 posted 2001-08-25 10:51 AM

Beautiful!

Thank You
~~~Connie~~~

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