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Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

0 posted 2001-08-22 11:18 AM

Nightdreams

~*~

Shadows parlay light
Skein by skein sheer lacy dream
Come to me this night

~*~

Toward your recall
Fingers touching mist of real
Footsteps down past’s hall

~*~

Hearts quietly reaching
Words silenced though beseeching
Still, I come to you

~*~

[This message has been edited by Lady In White (edited 08-22-2001).]

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-08-22 11:53 AM

very soft..and romantic... I enjoy the images created with so few words and the emotions conveyed... a talent indeed!!

shadow974
Senior Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 636
Michigan

2 posted 2001-08-22 12:19 PM

Beautifully written.

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.
ARAB PROVERB

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2001-08-22 02:18 PM

love the way this makes me feel and think

very nice!!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2001-08-22 02:47 PM

What SEA said

Is she following me?

Wes Utica
Junior Member

since 2000-08-12

Posts 28
California

5 posted 2001-08-22 03:49 PM

Lady - your words do not betray your title. These are not silly day dream meanderings. They are the stuff dreams are made of.

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

6 posted 2001-08-23 12:41 PM

Ahh, Lady, never have so few words said so very much. What a wonderful write and the pic, well, you could easily walk down that path into the past...very gentle smile

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

7 posted 2001-08-23 01:29 AM

I hate to imitate Interloper, but ditto what Logan just said

really!

~*Homepage*~ http://www.mysteria-poetry.cityslide.com/contents/contents.cfm/722155

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2001-08-23 12:13 PM

LadyInWhite~
Such a lovely stroll to take~
Likes me muchly~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

9 posted 2001-08-24 04:15 PM

"Hearts quietly reaching
Words silenced though beseeching
Still, I come to you"

Pure art! You get a wow on this one.

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

10 posted 2001-08-24 09:44 PM

Oh yes, this says it all. Wonderful work.
Sandra

Rick
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

11 posted 2001-08-25 09:38 AM

Dear Lady in White, a wonderful write, so discriptive and full of wonderment.

Rick

Rex Allen McCoy
Member Elite

since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

12 posted 2001-08-25 10:15 AM

Enjoyed this very much ...
it pulls the strings that make me smile

citizenx
Member

since 2001-07-31

Posts 189
motorcade

13 posted 2001-08-25 06:15 PM

very soft

"the blizzard of the world has crossed the threshold and it has overturned
the order of the soul" leonard cohen

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