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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Haiku We cannot change it Beginnings and their spend a Flowers birth and end |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I do not have a different plan so I choose life in choice of me... I KNOW...I suck at haikus...sigh..but yers was lovely...and perhaps one day, I'll figure out the verse of terse.  (I just don't get it...) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Serenity, It just means we can't control beginnings or ends. Thank you sweet for the read and response. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
you are me wise man of succinctity... and the daisy of me day   me |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
in past birth of I to find a me in you, then passings come too soon I so enjoy everything you pen, Sir...always have... |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
like the changing seasons...... beautiful Seymour "I know you, I walked with you once upon a dream" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Thank you my lovely daisy. Love ya Lady, Thank you lovely lady. *L* Sea, Right and thank you. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
but cause them, oh, yes, that's what we can, beginnings, or premature ends |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Vandana, Thanks for the enjoy. VAS, Absolutely, thank you |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ In the beginning We reach out for the ending Full-circle we go Completing in the blooming Flowers of the soul~ *Tanka you belly much~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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GracefullyPoetic Junior Member
since 2001-08-23
Posts 14AZ, USA |
I loved your Haiku. I agree with you. We can't really change begginnings, or look back on the past, and try to change it in the present. The past is past, and the future is now. I understand your Haiku, and want to see more of them from you. I enjoyed it very much!
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Seymour, So right on this one and what a lovely way to say it! Good Job! Cindi |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Sy-- A lovely Haiku. Nicely penned. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, You welcome belly much, with love and kisses. Gracefully, You shall and I will, thank you. Cpalmer, Thank you and I will. Poeminister, Thank you for the lovely, nicely. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
if we could my dear then the world must really fear war will be so near Very deep image here, really love it Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Titia, Very nice and thank you. |
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