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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597
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Transition Skip _ ping _ Stone _ stops and sinks deeply and longingly emersed in full wet contact eager to settle quietly and relax ______________ © 03.08.99 "As soon as the generals and the politicos can predict the motions of your mind, lose it." Wendell Berry [This message has been edited by Krawdad (edited 08-22-2001).] |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
oooo I like this, very visual...it's a good one to read when one wants to be heading for bed  |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
love it...helen |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
As one who has skipped many a stone and who is only now beginning to understand the relaxation of sinking, I appreciate this. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
oops...forgot something...GREAT to see you here...helen |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hey e...this IS cleverly constructed and reads so mellow...like meditation...very very nice work here...I can SEE the circles on the water in my mind. More please?  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Krawdad--enjoyed the thought of this. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
you've shown this very well. . . I could almost hear the water. . . great job. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
VAS, 1, Duncan, K, Martie, dg, Sven, Thank you for your comments. Glad you enjoyed. This was, of course, for all who feel themselves skipping along the surface of things, wishing it were otherwise . . . |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
E...did you thank me before i even got a chance to read this one?? lol you anticipated my visit?  i did indeed enjoy this! ..sometimes i feel much like that little stone..doing my darndest to keep above the waters surface..then ....sink..bubble bubble bubble... nifty write.. hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
What a clever little poem! Well done~Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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citizenx Member
since 2001-07-31
Posts 189motorcade |
like the way this unravels, nice poem. "the blizzard of the world has crossed the threshold and it has overturned |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
dg, Idiocy or prescience? Take your pick.    I haven't a clue. And thanks for stopping by, after the fact. lol Glad you enjoyed. Melissa & citizenx, Thanks for the read and the compliments. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
This is different. I like it very much. Tracey If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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