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Alan
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0 posted 2001-08-21 11:42 PM



The Kiss

Kiss me in the morning
As the sun kisses the day
Kiss me with a smile
That takes my blues away
Kiss me with love
Like the clouds kiss the sky above
Kiss me with the fire
Fueled by our love
Kiss me with your fingertips
As sweet words escape your lips
Come hold me close
Let our bodies kiss
Let them mold and blend as one
Let our hearts kiss
Out of true love
Let our souls kiss
Out of eternal love

Icyheart/alan
08/20/01

© Copyright 2001 Alan - All Rights Reserved
Paula Finn
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1 posted 2001-08-21 11:50 PM


simply beautiful
Dee
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2 posted 2001-09-01 10:11 PM


Alan, well did you get the kiss you wanted  
I really enjoyed the love you show in this.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

Enchantress
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3 posted 2001-09-01 10:22 PM


Beautiful and sooo romantic!
kiss, kiss, kiss!!  

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Tracey
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4 posted 2001-09-01 10:31 PM


I don't think you can call yourself "Icyheart" when you write words such as this. Sent tingles up my spine. Lovely writing

Tracey

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Alan
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5 posted 2001-09-01 10:55 PM


Thanks ladies...glad you all liked it.
Tracey..as far as "icyheart" it is what I go under at all the other boards I post at.  

catalinamoon
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6 posted 2001-09-02 04:38 PM


warm heart would be more like it. What a gem of a poem here, I hope you get lots of these kinds of kisses.  
Sandra

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7 posted 2001-09-02 04:46 PM


Alan~ this is soooooooooooo nice  
very warm thoughts here  

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Alan
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8 posted 2001-09-02 04:54 PM


catalinamoon..I will stick with icyheart..i am glad you like the poem...as for the kisses..i never get enough of them..

SEA..thanks for the sweet comment...

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2001-09-02 04:59 PM


I llke the way you composed this kiss Alan...James
dgvarner
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10 posted 2001-09-02 05:16 PM


what is this "icyheart" stuff....!     romance such as this, doesnt come from icyhearts!  you must, YOU MUST change your name on all those other boards..!  lol

this is wonderful alan..nothin like a kiss...



hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

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          Love much"

Alan
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11 posted 2001-09-02 05:35 PM


James.thanks sir,

dgvarner....thanks you..there is something better than a kiss...a bunch of them..

ethome
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12 posted 2001-09-02 07:17 PM


Oh the romance just blooms around that full moon!! Absolutely great romantic stuff!
Alan
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13 posted 2001-09-02 08:01 PM


Thanks ethome...
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