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shadow974
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0 posted 2001-08-21 10:36 PM



Three-in-one

On a starlit night
Memories flickering
In an out of sight

While walking down
A lonely road
I thought on what
My life had shown

In the dark distance
I saw me myself and I walk by

I looked at me
And myself
I think we blushed

Change can be so hard to do
But it’s impossible
If I only look at you

Memories still twinkle
In my night
But now I use them
As insight

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.
ARAB PROVERB

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1 posted 2001-08-21 10:39 PM


wow   very nicely done for your 500th post!  
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2 posted 2001-08-21 10:40 PM



Congratulations on your 500th post!

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3 posted 2001-08-21 10:49 PM


Absolutely love the last verse.  Congratulations.
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4 posted 2001-08-22 01:34 AM


I loved the last part as well just great!  Congratulations on your 500th post Shadow!

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5 posted 2001-08-22 02:08 AM


"Memories still twinkle
In my night
But now I use them
As insight"

liked this...congrats on the 500th...helen


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