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BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

0 posted 2001-08-21 09:53 PM

A Very Deep Well

The deep abyss of silence
too intense
is the distant ocean of blues
where cries are heard
in longings of rescue
I wish to wipe away all tears
cradle fears
in forever arms
now empty for you
in a very deep well

BloomingRose

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2001-08-21 10:27 PM

oh this is such a bittertsweet sad beauty...
written with such poetic "drama" ...
aching and longing wrapped up in imagery.
sad but so lovely in its melancholy
well done Deb and so good to see you here again

jm

Feels like Im dancin with truth and wisdom
Precious rhythm you are my guide
These days are sacred, my heart is humble
Oh warrior show me thy light

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

2 posted 2001-08-24 03:43 AM

Deb-
   What an emotional piece this is.
   So much feeling wrapped up into just a few words.
   Wonderfully done.

   Hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2001-08-24 04:48 AM

beautiful~

~Wynter

rwood
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since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

4 posted 2001-08-25 10:45 AM

So beseeching. Imploring with echoes. Wonderful write!

Sincerely,
Regina

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2001-08-25 04:03 PM

BloomingRose~
Hey, pretty lady ... pretty poetry suits you so well.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

6 posted 2001-08-25 05:10 PM

Thank you all for very kind words. I wrote this after a recent very dishearting loss.

Deb

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-08-26 12:13 PM

never to be filled again. . . truly sad. . .

well written and heartfelt my friend. . .

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Kay Vibbert
Junior Member

since 2001-08-25

Posts 35
Indiana

8 posted 2001-08-26 01:25 AM

this is stunning and so sad!

"It's not gossip unless I tell it to somebody else!" Lucy Ricardo

Kay (aka/Irish Rose)

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